Double Page Spread Final

This is my final double page spread and i have used feedback from the other pages and drafts to make this more effective. I have used the conventions i have researched like the use of the pull quotes and the drop cap. I believe that the colour scheme of the page also suits the magazines house style and this is supported by the use of the text styles which is similar to the text used in of the parts of the magazine. I believe that this makes the page look more professional and more like a legitimate magazine double page spread. However i think that the spacing and layout is a bit ineffective as the page doesn't look uniform and organised. For example the masthead at the top of the article should be thinner to be the same width as the text, this would make that side of the page look less messy and organised. A previous draft of this page had the same image but the colour scheme was more blue which didn't fit the house style and the text style also didn't fit the house style; making the page look out of place when put with the other parts of the magazine. I have tried to use a similar technique with the edges of the white area which is also present on the front cover. I believe that this has the same rebellious connotations that suit the target audience. Overall i believe that this is an effective double page spread but it could have some modifications to be improved.